Saturday, April 24, 2010

Dedicated fully to Steve. BUT EVERYONE ELSE feel free to read my poem plz????

Dedicated fully to Steve.





Sitting on this bench,


allowing the rain to wash my skin.


Thinking of the past,


and how I just can't let it go.


The barrier around me,


has completety broken from my anger.


No longer controlled,


free to think of what I must.





Facing all of it.


This time, the whole entire monster.


My horrifying past,


the one I can't seem to erase.


Wishing it was gone,


wishing I could be a tiger...


hunting its pray.


My pray I'd kill till sundown...


but that's out of the question.





The rain washes it away,


washes away all the tension in my body.


Thinking more clearly,


maybe I'll see things for what they are.


The bloody truth.


Scratching my had,


I contemplate even more deeply.


Searching through me,


like a man hunting for honey...


in a crowded bee hive.





Moving on is it,


it's exactly what I must do.


I must be the prey,


running from the monster.


But, succeeding in running...


getting away.


Starting over is it,


but somethings holding me back.


But what is it? Is it that secret deep within me?


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I know it seems unfinished... i just couldn't think of a ending.. one to make you think real hard... a poem that makes ya think... ya know? But whatever... what do you think of it so far?

Dedicated fully to Steve. BUT EVERYONE ELSE feel free to read my poem plz????
jaja, I love the poem, almost as much as I love you. Your a very special friend and I'd do anything for you. I hope you know how very special you are. You will make someone very happy, I only wish I was 25 years younger.
Reply:it's very good. he'll love it when he reads it.
Reply:wow i like this, if al poems were like this then i would read them more
Reply:awesomeness!! that was really good!!
Reply:i'ts a very good poem
Reply:I love it, it really makes you think. I like the ending too, it leaves you to wonder. This is a really good poem.


p.s where is steve?
Reply:What is it? It's the rain =)





Where is Steve? In the poem. LOL Steve's the rain.
Reply:It's a great.....text, it lacks poetry, you have the inspiration, the words, the expression, bring it to the next level.

baby jade

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