Still.rain.heart.Beats?

I miss talking like we used to.


Where words meant everything.


And we didn't have to hold up the constellations.


Just so the stars wouldn't fall.











Nothing makes any sense.


Without the bliss of skin rubbing next to unidentified bones.


And I'm so sick of silence.


And how everything means nothing.














I've been feeling crushed lately.


Suffocating on the things I just couldn't bring myself to say.


Wishing for a center alignment to show you that every piece is still here.


But baby, let's just face the fact that we're both broken.














I miss a lot of things these days.


The way the rain falls down on these warm nights.


And the way you twist my words into everything their not.


I miss every mistake and every erase mark on the paper.














Because all I wanted was for everything to be ok.


but nothing's okay. when the sky shattered worse than my heart.


and your hands couldn't let go of the door handle long enough


to catch me.

Still.rain.heart.Beats?
awww..that is really good. that is exactly how i feel right now. you just wish that you could be their like "best friend" again like good old days and make everything alright again..i think this shows how ppl feel when they loose someone that they know they should be with...its like loosing part of yourself. you just wanna die inside. i really enjoyed reading it. it brings out all the emotions of heart break. =) good job.
Reply:wow...thats REALLY good...my favourite paragraph was the last one...but geez...i love the whole thing...its really good...you should keep writing....
Reply:nice, is that your experience?


hehehehe,lol,


but that's a nice poem


I like it...
Reply:Very, very, good!
Reply:wow!!!!!
Reply:well to be honest u arent exactly the best poet but u are really good it may not rhyme but it sure does get the point across of how u feel so keep it up .